Issue a Restraining Order?
In
my novel, Baggage
burdens., Jill struggled to have absolutely nothing more to do with
Dave Bossard. If she understood the law, she might have gone to court to
request a restraining order against Dave. For
Jill’s peace of mind would a judge, would you grant Jill that order?
Jill’s Evidence––Unwanted
Attention
Dave
shouts from the pantry. “Where’s the extra Doritos and salsa sauce?”
Jill
turns and calls out the location. When she enters the pantry, he’s placing a
couple of bags of Doritos on the counter top. He bends over looking in the
lower cupboard for the salsa. As she nears him, he stands up holding a jar in
each hand. A smile lights up his face. With one foot he closes the cupboard
door. Then he starts to topple. In a swift motion Jill rushes to him and firmly
grips the edge of the counter top with both hands. She braces for the impact of
Dave’s body. Her swift action prevents Dave from crashing to the floor.
“Oooooo!”
cries Dave as he struggles to regain his balance. “That could’ve been a disaster.” He laughs. His breath, heavy with
the smell of beer, assaults Jill’s nostrils.
‘Too
much to drink,’ she thinks. ‘And the party’s only started.’
For
a couple of moments the two are frozen, as if each is enjoying the other’s
presence. Jill recovers first. Clearing her throat, she leans away from Dave.
Then she takes the jars from his hands, and places them on the counter.
The
intoxicating warmth of Jill’s body tempts Dave. Still leaning heavily against
the counter, he gently wraps his arms around Jill’s lower back and draws her
closer. Jill pushes her head away from the stench of cigarette smoke on Dave’s
T-shirt. Her hips press him into the counter. She feels his excitement as she
leans against him. When her head is far enough away, she sees a foolish
clown-like grin. It almost makes her laugh.
“You
know, you’re absolutely great! Have I told you that?” Dave’s words slur.
Jill
shakes her head causing her ponytail to flap around.
“I’d
like to give you a small token of my thanks if I may.”
“You don’t need to, really.”
“Thanks,
I know it isn’t needed, but I’d still like to . . . .” Dave’s hands lightly slide up her back
to the top of her shoulders.
“Really
Dave, you don’t need to. Your words are enough.” Jill places her hands on the
top of Dave’s chest. She pushes herself away. Dave offers little resistance
convincing Jill she’ll be free.
“Just
one kiss. It’ll be fun.” Dave’s hand cups the back of her head.
“Daaave,” pleads Jill. ‘Let me go.’
“Come
on. Just one kiss.” While holding her head firmly, he pulls himself so close to
her face she feels the beer-tainted breath.
Seeing
words won’t change Dave’s intent, she increases pressure on Dave’s chest.
Suddenly she loses balance. The whole room turns. Gravity forces her against
Dave, as if Mother Nature supports Dave’s desire. While plastered against Dave,
his lips find hers. At first he’s gentle. As his passion grows, his hold
strengthens, his breathing increases, his body turns into an oven. Dave moans
as if savoring his favorite dessert.
Jill’s
drive to escape momentarily vanishes. Then reality surfaces.
‘I
can’t move! I’m helpless. I can’t do anything. No!’
A
surge of energy rushes to Jill’s aid. As if overtaken by a seizure, Jill wildly
jerks and twists. At first her futile search for wiggle room frightens her.
Escape at any cost summons a stronger crazed energy. Then, as if someone opens
a window, cool rescuing air enters. Her nightmare ends. The pressure on her
back lets up.
Jill’s Evidence––Then
He Pursued Me
“Jill, I’m sorry, but I won’t be able to make it
later on in the day to see you in the Brick Theatre’s final performance.”
That’s the last thing Jill expected to hear from her
loving grandmother. Josey’s excited voice fails to lessen Jill’s apprehension.
“Don’t
worry. I’ll be down Labor Day Monday,” adds Josey.
Jill doesn’t ask why the delay.
“I have a surprise for you. An old friend, a special
friend, wants to come down and see you.”
Robin momentarily flashes to Jill’s mind.
“He said he had to work on Saturday so we agreed to
come down on Monday.”
“Dave,”
gasps Jill in disbelief. “How did he find you?”
“Mrs. Maxwell put him in touch with me. She phoned
and said she was really moved by Dave’s appeal to find you. Mrs. Maxwell asked
if I would at least listen to him. I agreed. I understand that the two of you
had some kind of falling out, but Dave seems sincerely remorseful. He said
something about moving. What really impressed me is that he seems like he
really wants to try to make amends. I sense he really cares for you. Giving him
a second chance might not be a bad idea.”
Mrs. Sommerveld can’t see the shock on Jill’s face.
The long silence worries her.
‘What do I say? Don’t bring him,’ thinks Jill. ‘Then
I’ll have to explain why. I’m not telling her what happened at Dave’s house. If
I offer no reason why he can’t come, then she’ll just point out that Mrs.
Maxwell and she think it would be a good idea to give Dave another
chance.’
“Jill, you there?” Mrs. Sommerveld’s request jolts
Jill.
“Y-e-a-h,” Jill responds trying to figure out what to
do.
“ It is okay, isn’t it, if I bring Dave?”
What is Jill to say? With her grandmother’s help Jill
moved to Brampton. Jill felt safe living in a different city? Now Dave found
her. He even convinced Jill’s rescuing angel, Mrs. Maxwell, and her grandmother
that he should be able to see her. Neither of them knows everything that
happened in the pantry and Jill’s not about to reveal the ugly truth. What is
Jill to do?
Is Jill’s fear of Dave sufficient to convince a judge
to grant Jill a restraining order to keep Dave away from her? Would you grant Jill a restraining order?
haiku capsule:
a beer fueled kiss
shatters the hoped-for friendship
pantry love is lost
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